Comments on: A Love Universal http://writers-blog.org Writing a blog about writing Sun, 06 Nov 2011 01:46:25 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: sofia lachhab http://writers-blog.org/texts-and-oddities/a-love-universal/comment-page-1/#comment-5845 sofia lachhab Fri, 25 Feb 2011 16:29:47 +0000 http://writers-blog.org/?page_id=12#comment-5845 ohh !! i really liked u stories , especially this one . I wish to u nice continuation :) ohh !! i really liked u stories , especially this one . I wish to u nice continuation :)

]]> By: Jeppe Grünberger http://writers-blog.org/texts-and-oddities/a-love-universal/comment-page-1/#comment-2398 Jeppe Grünberger Wed, 06 Oct 2010 13:19:06 +0000 http://writers-blog.org/?page_id=12#comment-2398 A biped would be a creature with two legs/feet like say... a human. Metaphysical would be anything describing ideas or theories beyond the realm of physics which this technically doesn't do more than most stories - if you mean fantastical, then yes. I furthermore don't see the need to label anything as being for example a vampire, especially since the modern day vampire is more of a para-romantic teen with serious whining issues than anything else. I am not sure what a realistic story is except a sales trick, but you might find that most of my other short stories are somewhat rooted in everyday life, if that is what you mean. I thank you for your kind thoughts and wish you luck in return. A biped would be a creature with two legs/feet like say… a human. Metaphysical would be anything describing ideas or theories beyond the realm of physics which this technically doesn’t do more than most stories – if you mean fantastical, then yes. I furthermore don’t see the need to label anything as being for example a vampire, especially since the modern day vampire is more of a para-romantic teen with serious whining issues than anything else. I am not sure what a realistic story is except a sales trick, but you might find that most of my other short stories are somewhat rooted in everyday life, if that is what you mean. I thank you for your kind thoughts and wish you luck in return.

]]> By: Okebiorun mary http://writers-blog.org/texts-and-oddities/a-love-universal/comment-page-1/#comment-2397 Okebiorun mary Wed, 06 Oct 2010 12:31:32 +0000 http://writers-blog.org/?page_id=12#comment-2397 Your story is vague, and highly metaphysical.who are those beings, are they vampires, and what is d meaning of bipeds, are they animals.pls when next you write, give us realistic stories. Goodluck! Your story is vague, and highly metaphysical.who are those beings, are they vampires, and what is d meaning of bipeds, are they animals.pls when next you write, give us realistic stories. Goodluck!

]]> By: Jeppe Grünberger http://writers-blog.org/texts-and-oddities/a-love-universal/comment-page-1/#comment-695 Jeppe Grünberger Wed, 14 Apr 2010 15:29:09 +0000 http://writers-blog.org/?page_id=12#comment-695 I will answer your questions very directly, as I am unsure how else to: 1. No 2. A being of some sort. 3. On a planet of some sort inhabited by humanoid beings of some sort. 4. In seconds? I have no idea, but the protagonist didn't seem to perceive it as a very long time. 5. No he did not. Those questions failed to get anyone anywhere, right? I would recommend that you try a less puzzle-solving approach to literature of this kind; literature is more about the sensation caused by reading it and the world hidden in the omissions from the narrative and less about filling in the blanks. I will answer your questions very directly, as I am unsure how else to:
1. No
2. A being of some sort.
3. On a planet of some sort inhabited by humanoid beings of some sort.
4. In seconds? I have no idea, but the protagonist didn’t seem to perceive it as a very long time.
5. No he did not.

Those questions failed to get anyone anywhere, right? I would recommend that you try a less puzzle-solving approach to literature of this kind; literature is more about the sensation caused by reading it and the world hidden in the omissions from the narrative and less about filling in the blanks.

]]> By: That Critic http://writers-blog.org/texts-and-oddities/a-love-universal/comment-page-1/#comment-633 That Critic Fri, 02 Apr 2010 05:36:03 +0000 http://writers-blog.org/?page_id=12#comment-633 Uh.. I didn't get it.. Did he just eat his wife? Annnd what was he? Where were they? How long did this story take place, over a millennium? Or did he actually forget her name, at the end, over the period of 20 seconds..? Uh.. I didn’t get it.. Did he just eat his wife?
Annnd what was he?
Where were they?
How long did this story take place, over a millennium?
Or did he actually forget her name, at the end, over the period of 20 seconds..?

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